End Love Poem by Suraiya Islam

End Love

Rating: 4.5


I wanted him an hour of poetry,
He went to look for a book of poems to give.
Where there was a touch of affection or a statement of pains.
Juliet looked on the way and waited
But nonchalant Romeo did not come back.
Juliet waited, waited for hopping to get back the fragrant paradise.
Juliet didn't know, It was wrong to expect from one.
Meanwhile, Juliet fell asleep while waiting.
Romeo of this era no to care about it.
This is how loves end

End Love
Friday, September 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 04 October 2020

'But nonchalant Romeo did not come back' - it goes well with the caption of the poem. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Suraiya Islam 04 October 2020

Thank you for your comment. I am very glad that you liked this poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 September 2020

Ended all paths But no end was there Soul of love eternal Memory never dies Love lives long soul to soul

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Suraiya Islam 11 September 2020

Thanks for your compliment who like this poem. I'm very grateful. Keep in touch with me

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Suraiya Islam. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2021

A poignant poem of love. Not all we want to be with can reciprocate the feelings we have for them. Very touching.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

This poem is chosen twice, last year and today. WOW! Twice CONGRATS!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day.5 Stars fir this amazing poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 October 2020

I told you to read the Songs of Offerings You went to fetch the Lord Byron I told you to listen the flute of Lord Krishna But you painted the sufferings of Heer No sun rises for our togetherness No moon enlightens for our togetherness No flower blooms for our togetherness We are still alone on our love path We are still half.........

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 October 2020

Meanwhile, Juliet fell asleep while waiting. Romeo of this era no to care about it. This is how loves end......oh! sometimes some desired loves are ended over on half ways; half there is where waiting falls in asleep (subconscious mind): beautifully presented the scenery of half love by delineating the ROMEO and JULIET figures; congrats for being selected as POD

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