End Of Good Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

End Of Good Relation

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I wanted to get out of this place
As I was forcibly chased
Into ideas of going very much wild
Molest her and madly run after her as blind

She was such nice companion
True in her approach for union
But not for such kind of alliance
Before making it clear at once

She will always come and frankly converse
Mingle so closely and act as fearless
I do not know how come that idea entered
She was almost in mind to be cornered

“Stop, stop” the mind tempted down
The good counsel touched and idea was blown
I now realized it was foolish step
She might have not only broken but slapped too

Sometimes we are reckless to venture
Threatening the land for which we are unsure
It is proving complete disaster
We are reduced to slave from being master

It was stupid idea altogether
It was bad side to offer
Love was not at all at consideration
It was to be an end of god relation

Thursday, April 17, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

I wanted to get out of this place As I was forcibly chased

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

nice Minelva Carty21 minutes ago Pulled me in Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

wow Sharlie Pilcher20 minutes ago real. deep. honest.

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The poem narrates the temptation of mind in such situations and beautifully told the things and so good.

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The poem narrates the temptation of mind in such situations and beautifully told the things and so good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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