Enervating Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Enervating

Rating: 5.0

April
Summer heat
Devastating
Enervating…

A cool breeze saunters in
Holds me in a tight lustful hug
Her moist lips on my lips
Like germinating seeds,

Her hands ebbing on the small of my back
With nails she writes a poem of love
At the most appropriate spot,
I am unable to gather myself,

A sensuous warmth envelops me
Inviting softness on my breast
The long slender fingers
Of her fragrant locks caress my face.

I pass into a deep trance.

Tuesday, April 23, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: Summer ,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 23 April 2024

What a beautiful delight! To turn a cool breeze into s sensual loving poem with such delicate and gorgeous feelings that also hug the reader in their beauty and coolness, felt beyond your lovely

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Thank you Sandra. For the beautiful comments. For your valuable time. It is quite pleasant to feel that we have the same wavelength

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 April 2024

Just be misled and I have enjoyed this gorgeous result of your amazing poetic creation. My grandest applause for you, dear Unnikrishnan 5 Stars Full and myriads more

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 April 2024

The wonderful warm summer weather can suddenly enchant us, we are fascinated by the soft warm weather, completely right to want to be encapsulated, who can resist such soft warm weather?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2024

Each and every stanza stands out with great opening lines To my favorites

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2024

A captivating, unique and highly imaginative write on the power and effects of wind. Brilliantly crafted with superb images..

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Sandra Feldman 23 April 2024

2. and highly wonderful, emotional poem. Very, very original and lovely!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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