Gone
haiku's
form
format
and finite
fittings
Left
the rites
of summer
spring winter fall
structureless
one breath
blows
past my
ear
Excellent! Inventive and brilliant. Very much I like it.
clever, my friend, very very good for your first Waltz Wave, esp. Looking forward to what you can do with this form!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Structureless one breath blows' Rachel Ann Butler