English Haiku Poem by ray Schreiber

English Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Gone
haiku's
form
format
and finite
fittings
Left
the rites
of summer
spring winter fall
structureless
one breath
blows
past my
ear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Structureless one breath blows' Rachel Ann Butler

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 November 2009

Excellent! Inventive and brilliant. Very much I like it.

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Lillian Thomas 30 October 2009

clever, my friend, very very good for your first Waltz Wave, esp. Looking forward to what you can do with this form!

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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