Eros In Spring Poem by Daniel Brick

Eros In Spring

Rating: 5.0


She sits very still
in a grassy plot that will
soon be night, crossed with shadows,
pierced by shafts of piercing moonight.
She sits very still, revolving her thoughts.

I am standing a short distance from her
in a grove of trees with pale green leaves.
There is no breeze. Every leaf is still,
even my breathing is slow and soundless.
Her twilight complxion is more beautiful

than twilight itself. "Turn toward me, "
I plead. "See me. Greet me." To no avail.
I walk tentatively behind her, and enter
the edge of her grassy plot. Suddenly
I feel like an interloper, and leave quickly.

As I turn away, as I walk away,
her presence weighs on me. I feel motionless
air on my arms and face. I see traces of moonlight
on my clothes, even the silence touches me.
But that girl of spring touches me most deeply.

Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness
fading light all acknowledge me, ansd yet
she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even
in nearness? We are sharing this silence.
We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.

Friday, July 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,nature,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 24 July 2020

Feeling and mentally seeing this beautiful imaginary, imaginary film of poetic love.

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Soran M. H 28 September 2020

Why do moon and trees, air and heat, darkness fading light all acknowledge me, and yet she is silent, self-absorbed, distant even in nearness? We are sharing this silence. We are of one mind. It should be a shared spring.

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Smoky Hoss 07 September 2020

Tis beautiful indeed! Wonderful.

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Straight to my poem list.....thx

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M Asim Nehal 05 August 2020

Fantastic poem my friend. For sometime I felt as if I am standing there and witnessing the beauty of the nature and spring. Great imagery and flawless flow. Beyond rating.....1000

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Glen Kappy 05 August 2020

with this you summon for me, daniel, the ache, the pangs we can feel, at beauty glimpsed, part of what i reference in my newest poem " to swallow beauty." i've enjoyed this time with your latest poems. continue to walk in beauty, brother. -glen

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