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Concealed in a corner
In a blanket tightly bound
This was a border
In which I could be found

Stuck in a place
The only place I could call home
If I only knew this place
Could I say I felt alone

The only friend I didn't mind
Was my mind invading my space
At times my friend I couldn't find
So our friendship was erased

I thought myself stable
And completely connected
Never any fables
Much less room for discontentment
And still my sense went

And I spent many hours
Searching like a fiend
Searching for a whole
Searching for a meaning
Searching in my soul
Searching without leaving

Submitted: Sunday, July 01, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 18, 2012


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  • Alla Simone (11/12/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    I like this one. Conveys the idea of puttng up a wall, and being in denial, while spending o much time turned inward. Extreme introvertism. In the last stanza your voice escalates well, and it ends perfectly.

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