Escapism Poem by Juneil Sechico

Escapism

Rating: 5.0


Dive in my head and you will see,
The fairness of my fantasy,
My reason to reside in my dream;
Leave the world of chaos and pain.

Crabs learn to fly, cats and dogs talk;
Butterflies swim, fish ran and walk;
Rats work for cheese, steal no more;
Gold scintillating in the shore.

Sheep is ruling over the wolves;
The power of love is unfold;
Stars kneel before vagabonds;
Equanimity covers the land.

Home in the navel of the sea,
I will reside with harmony,
Peace in the midst of the storm,
In my heart is a rainbow to form.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 27 March 2009

I dived into your head and i dived into your poem.........your poem reminded me of my poem unbelievable dream............Good Write......10+++.....

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Nice work Juneil. I liked the first line as it really gets the reader in. Your imagery is wonderful and your philosophy commended. Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 23 February 2009

a simile write..with good invitation to examine fully concept of mind into peace..10

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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