Okami Kamikaze

Rookie (1991 / Oklahoma)

Eternal Silence Poem by Okami Kamikaze


Silence
Silence when we are walking,
Silence when we think,
Silence is what fills us all,
With a binding eternal link.

Silence in the little children,
Silence in the adults,
Silence wrapping around us all,
Silence pulsing in the walls.

Silence fills this hollow world,
Silence is the choice we make,
Silence is the death of this all,
Silence is our fate.

Submitted: Sunday, October 19, 2008
Edited: Friday, February 13, 2009

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  • Gold Star - 30,345 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2009 7:46:00 PM)

    Silence
    Silence when we are walking,
    Silence when we think,
    Silence is what fills us all,
    With a binding eternal link.
    silence is our choice...10 good poem to be enjoyed...10

    read mine you go alone and silence please.... why we need rest? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (1/28/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful way of addressing an issue that is ever present but never
    addressed. I was also impressed by the structure you chose to express it.
    Repetition is excellant and warranted to make the point. I was very pleased.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bethany Seed (10/29/2008 5:32:00 PM)

    wow this is a very gd poem! keep on wrighting!

    best of wishis
    bethany (Report) Reply

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