Evensong: Grafton Heights Poem by GORDON GILHULY

Evensong: Grafton Heights

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fireflies moving like finely shattered starlight


against the sky-shaped gown of evening;


the wind tongues its lascivious moans in the ears of the leaves,


whispers sweet nothings to the world.




the blue of evening turns velvet,


indigo, lingering like an unspoken hope;


the singed moon waiting.




you, beside me, thick-sweatered against the approaching cold,


we watch the fire's last flames lick, hesitate, die;


our soft voices, sweet, like pigeons brooding.




my words bear my longing up into the darkness like sparks

Evensong: Grafton Heights
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 11 July 2017

Intense, imaginative and passionate and that crescendo finish. Very nice!

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Gordon Gilhuly 12 July 2017

Thanks, Captain - much appreciated!

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Richard Wlodarski 11 July 2017

Gordon, I love this love poem. The imagery is so vivid. And each, and every sing line...perfect! ! !

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Gordon Gilhuly 11 July 2017

Thanks, once again, Richard.

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