Ever? Poem by Liliana EL.

Ever?

Rating: 5.0


Another day
I may hug him
I may smile and say hi
I may love him
Perhaps we'll go out
for a walk in the park
by the pond under the light
The scarlet ibis' will fly out
The grand lotus petals will gleam

By sunset we'd have smiled many times
and given some good laughs too
The night will be perfect as we stare into each others eyes
Enjoying the intensity of our rush
of emotion

Another day.

Today is not that day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 27 September 2013

very nice.have a nice day.simple and beautiful.

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Lawerence Mize 28 September 2013

But tomorrow may be. Great poem. Enjoyed it a lot. And yes, I write from experience. Thank you for the nice comments.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 December 2021

A few beautiful moments with the morning sun and breeze and green and dew drops make your day beautiful energetic and effective, just because the smile of the sun, the breeze, the greens and the dew drops would rub on you too.

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Chinedu Dike 18 December 2019

A beautiful poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Vlad Mutuleanu 20 October 2013

Beautiful poem, there are days when I feel exactly the same.

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Vlad Mutuleanu 20 October 2013

Beautiful poem, there are days when I feel the exact same way.

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Vlad Mutuleanu 20 October 2013

Beautiful poem, fits me so much right now!

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