Exhilaration Poem by Patricia Gale

Exhilaration

Rating: 5.0


Pressing down
Thrusting down
Hand gripped tight
Downwards
Upwards
Then down, and then up again

The wind blowing through my hair
The scent of spring gliding by
Exhilaration, my heart going faster
Nothing can stop me now

Warm cool evening
With the top down
Driving a five speed soft top Jeep is a blast!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very naughty Patricia but very nice. I have a similar one about a spinning top. Your words and images are so free flowing after the let down. A very clever piece of writing. Karin Anderson

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Francis Duggan 06 January 2008

Another very good poem here Patricia up to your usual high standards

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Paul Butters 12 May 2007

As our late great comedian Eric Morecambe would say, 'There's No Answer to That! ' Naughty but neat. Paul.

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Melvina Germain 25 April 2007

You naughty lady, what do you think I was thinking, Excellent Patricia --Melvina--

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