~ Expiry ~ Date ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Expiry ~ Date ~

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~ EXPIRY ~ DATE ~
Ms. Nivedita
02.11.09.
UK

Everything has expiry date
Medicine ~ Polypacked Blood
Transfusion Kit ~ Transfusion Fluid
Disposable Syringe
Male / Female ~ Contraceptives
i-Pills and so on…

Every thing has
Best use before
Pizza ~ Perfume
Showergel ~ Shampoo
Lipgloss ~ Toiletries
Sanitarynapkin ~ Condoms &c

Why no expiry dates of
Birth ~ Abortion
Life ~ Death
Love ~ Hate
Benevolence ~ Greed
Ecstasy ~ Agony
Optimism ~ Pessimism
Wedding ~ Divorce
Celibacy ~ Libertinism
Sexitation ~ Frigidity
Fidelity ~ Infidelity
Virtue ~ Vice
&c…

Ne’er ending culmination
E’er going contemplation.

Why no Expire Date?

Excogitating: E = mc2?
Knows who?

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 29 May 2010

Everything has expiry date Medicine ~ Polypacked Blood Transfusion Kit ~ Transfusion Fluid Disposable Syringe Male / Female ~ Contraceptives i-Pills and so on… innovation is there with a support of rich idea and meaningful way of expression..which is some how indirect but much is there to conceive..well done

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 June 2010

Because life and death is usually natural.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 July 2010

i see your point... well expressed poem

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C N Prem Kumar 03 July 2010

Short words, strong effects. Truly modern.

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Aastha Uppal 08 July 2010

nice willingness to have an expiry date for certain things but truly its the outlook.. we can't really have everything at our own will.. or so as to say human demands never have an expiry date and nor do our emotions or else great works like this one would not come up.. nice and a different theme... nice write

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Joub Kahuria 26 March 2012

well the expiry date is a unique perspective i like your sincerity to bring the point across....nice work keep it up

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Abhishek Tiwari 10 November 2011

Quite a different angle of view.. That gives special attraction towards this piece of work...

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Renu Kakkar 26 September 2011

nice, we all do have an expiry date but we are kept blind about it...we would not work then thinking time was almost over etc etc

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lost soul 03 May 2011

human events do expire as well but are too fleeting to be labeled especially Love ~ Hate Benevolence ~ Greed Ecstasy ~ Agony Optimism ~ Pessimism Wedding ~ Divorce original and laid out so nicely, I liked reading this poem. you have a unique perspective

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Lynn Glover 30 November 2010

Niv, everything you mentioned in this poem, plus many others, all have expiry dates. When God takes us home, that date is final here on earth, only to begin a beautiful beginning with Him. Good Write, enjoyed it.

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