~ Eve Niv ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Eve Niv ~

Rating: 4.4


Keep in
Bosoms’ sleeve
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Many looks -
Smart Street n’ Hip Hop
Cute n’ Tip Top
Vintage n’ Trendy
Blossoming BrunetteBlondie
Ethnic n’ Debonair
O’ Beaut connoisseur
Come-on to allure
Assure I’ll be your.

Says Eve Niv
Hush why?
Flush stale shy.

Will salve
Yours grieve
It’s Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Souses positive
Sucks negative.

Loving lulu
Diva div
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
With love leafage
Design her n’ weave.

Eve Niv
By grit n’ dash
Palpate the panache.

Phew n’ quip
Fie qui vive
I Eve Niv.

Me Eve Niv
Heady companion
Blatant bohemian.

View n’ accost
She is zombie
Harbor her freespree.

Blotto beaut
Heaving romance robe
Dipdouse in trove
Of Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Osculate your dearie
Tipsy toppie toffee
Licklap gusto in
Sloshed smoochsmoothie.
.
Your hottie
Eve Niv
Don’t cleave
In dame Eve Niv
Venturously dare to live.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 26 August 2010

Universal goodness reflects the whole of conjugal journey. EVE NIV is the personification simply of an idea....not a person. Thank you for crafting unreal to taste it through the real form of words with rhythm. Regards, 10 again pra..nab

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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2010

Smart Street n’ Hip Hop Cute n’ Tip Top Vintage n’ Trendy Blossoming BrunetteBlondie Your a Blossoming Brunette Blondie with a heartfelt appeal to men to love for real :) A street smart positive woman with an agenda of needed love care consideration for all. And when we dropp the attitudes masks walls of indifference and try a little kindness love hope the world around us blossoms for all. Love is still 'All We Need' :)

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Kevin Carney 08 October 2010

Absolute joy to read, so musical as the words jumped off the page. Kind of reminded me almost of a retro 60's feel. I have to say you have such a control of words that mesmerizes your readers. Great write.

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Dwi Utami 15 October 2010

Wooow..this is my third comment in your poetry EVE NIV. what else should i'say. Poetry is expression of the heart possibly never feel the pain if it would be difficult to write poetry full of tears. How i'could write poetry like your poetry joyful. Because my heart is always cloudy. You are nice poet keep always in fun 10/10

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Bert Bell 18 October 2010

I like this poem, Niv. I don’t read it as being intrinsically about you so much as it is a suggestion to others on how to keep their love relationships fresh and exciting by giving them variety in their relationship experiences with one another. It’s very good.

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So Close 27 September 2012

really excellent lines...fantastic work hands off... »so close«

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Louis Cecile 27 October 2011

Excellent use of language and metaphors. The hypnotic use of Eve Niv keeps it on ones mind.

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Ebi Robert 15 July 2011

Your diction is hidden from my eyes. But I think you are a substance.

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Subbaraman N V 28 November 2010

A great poem in your own inimitable style! Some may feel it a little difficult to understand the real significance.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 November 2010

Again a great poem full of wisdom and depth. Another feather to your cap. Innovative and vivid. A thought provoking write.

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