Exposed By Emotion Poem by Not Long Left

Exposed By Emotion

Rating: 4.5


The dams of distress
Finnally cracked
from the pressure
of the pain.
The restrained tears,
that rose with the years
slowly started to seep
through.
Soon a steady flow
of trapped emotion
flooded the room.
How human
you seemed
as the tears washed
away the harshness
of your face.
Lips trembled like
that of a child;
I saw you for the first time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelica Abington 09 June 2006

WOW Vincent, Very, very, good..I love everything about it. Well written.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 June 2006

dear vincent, i love this one very much, .

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