Seated behind the mask
Exploding with emotion
Determination!
Burns around his core
Zealous to be the best
Inspiring, motivating
Hearts, with simple rhymes
Metaphors from his heart
Excretes juices of love
Buckets of laughter
A taste of pleasure
The juiciness of sugar
Not by simple words
Or amazing jokes
He makes mouths laugh
But by the beauty
Twisted around his heart
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Dedicated to Myself
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Also try the man behind the mask
that's some cool objective analysis...hw many secs, this one?
I like your idea of dedicating a poem to yourself....thinking poetry out of the box...real cool indeed! !
Dear Eyan, How many mask you are wearing? The best one is to make others laugh.You have done that quite often. Now an auto bahn of confidence that flows like electricitythroughout the poem. Th is is the crux of the feature o f a poet 's self- confidence. The idea of dedicating it to yourself is great. for its fluent transition and poetic expression, you deserve onlyA-10 -Rajkumar
a fantastic write bibliography.......a confidence filled poem........you are the future...... you are the ray of hope of the future.........
am sure i was already at this page...the poet himself, authored his own words by his gleaming lines, by his passion, kindness and thru these skills i appreciate this poet's ability...ian, hope, this will lead to stardom of fame, , as i see ur eyes, it never surrender to the darkness of the night, ..the shadow of your kindness will always inspire my works.....u r the best, u know that...lavs ya...
''Metaphors from his heart Excretes juices of love Buckets of laughter The taste of pleasure The sweetest of sugar'' nice cognitive metaphor, dear Eyan, lovely to read..10+++ from me
true Beauty comes from withen, I love your style! your smiple grace, the flow, the words, the way words just pore out and always work. you are good! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
cool, liked it! totally different great theme!