Eyan Desir

(caribbean)

.... Full collection of seven deadly sins part 1


.....Lust.......

Straight from the gutters of hell!
She blows, sweeter than sugar
She burns, flaming desires
Consuming all our emotions
Imitating the wings of love
Exciting and breath taking
Over flowing souls with her passion
Raging with infatuation
Hungry with an obsession
Not submitting to devotion
So powerful and strong
Luscious tasty desires
Never last a lifetime
But cause some a lifetime of pain

........Adultery
In the circle that binds love
Wrapped with loyal bonds
Clever demons play their songs
In mortals weakness moments
The tunes of love and lust
Creeps within their core
Silencing all their morals
Rendering these mortals
To their emotions
Clever demons laugh
Whiles their legs splits apart
And a sinner rushes in
To eat the forbidden fruit

.....Jealousy

Resentment mixed with greed
Are the tunes she sings
From love and lust she bleed
On envy she feed
In human's core she live
Upset with what she loves
Envious of hearts possession
Dirtier than dirt
More twisted than a devil
It was her that corrupted him
And changed him into a rotten apple
Her song is a terrible thing
It opens a gate to other sins
This sour vindictive witch
Will push soul further from God
And straight into the fires of hell!

....

Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2009
Edited: Monday, October 19, 2009

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  • Rookie - 147 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (10/15/2009 9:30:00 PM)

    Your poem is filled with moral standards that many head not. for centuries man's attitude have shifted back and forth to suit a man's wants and needs.Your poem gives one something to think about.
    Good write, Eyan. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Louis Rams (10/7/2009 8:27:00 PM)

    a dynamic write, and like you said
    straight from the gutters of hell.

    a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Kristina B; Williams (10/7/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    EXPLOSIVE, AND, DYNAMIC..WHAT GREAT WRITE, YOU CAPTURED THOSE SINS, AND TURNED THEM INTO ANOTHER MORE SINFUL SIN, AND THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE OF WORK (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allan O (10/5/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    I enjoyed both parts, but must agree with another who made comment.
    broken down into single segments would have given better aspect.

    but i did enjoy...thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 147 Points Moriah Reyes (10/5/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    I think it's a bit harsh, but then so the things you are talking about are like that anyways....It was very interesting and good...i liked the imagery that i got and enjoyed the chance to see part of the 7 deadly sins in a new way! Thanks for inviting me here! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 147 Points Cess Kubai (10/2/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    Unique idea this but I think I would much rather have it in small doses- a poem at a time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 147 Points Vandavasu Vittal (10/2/2009 5:09:00 AM)

    Your art work is an experiment that worked wow good compilation of emotions and poems. Piercing good work my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 147 Points Lady Grace (9/28/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    your composition is a peculiar dear..and this is a sign of creativeness..this is not a brief summary but the copy of all deadly sins..mygosh..i think, this is my first time to see a posted poem consisting of many poems inside..this is a good idea...and every step u make..hope, there's always an angel guiding your way...BISMILLAH (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Eyan Desir (9/27/2009 7:58:00 PM)

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    Yeah, I know it's long thank you if you read......
    I felt the breath of God in my heart
    So I let his words out...If I burn in the fires of hell
    I will try my best to please my God..... (Report) Reply

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