hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 66,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Eyes Speak - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I found full blossom
That might have witnessed seldom
The natural emergency of beauty
A clear message from an almighty

Yes there was no confusion
And definitely no illusion
The eyes danced with invitation
That was beginning of good relation

I found some depth
Some feeling with breath
It inhaled deep trust
And exhaled as love burst

I do not know the impact
But feel it is simple act
It is feeling on both the sides
That shall slowly confide

Her eyes speak more
And I always adore
Not for her falling in love
But certain things I believe

It shall consolidate bond
To which I am very much fond
I have stood for and cherished
It is all that I have wished


Comments about Eyes Speak by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 5:07:00 AM)

    Souzi Raad likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welome
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 2:29:00 AM)

    moving


    Gloreen4 hours ago
    moving and powerful
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    My Oh My


    Susan Dalton4 hours ago
    You really are a gifted poet. I absolutely loved this, and understood both in layers and depth. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    Love through Eyes


    Prithvi Raj Datta4 hours ago
    Do care is needed to invite Love though Eyes alone.
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Good.

    Danyel L3 hours ago
    Very good, i enjoy your rhyming. :)
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Love come from the heart not the mouth.


    David Cook4 hours ago
    This poem speaks about love and death. How many time can I count the ways death oh death how many of us must die cause of love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Very wondrous, I have been told my eyes change color depending on my mood
    22 minutes ago by sargeant raven bunny to Eyes speak (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,251 Points Piyush Dey (7/28/2014 10:19:00 PM)

    it was a lovely poem. the lines were beautifully mixed with poetry and had nice rhymes.
    eyes speak. nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2014 10:02:00 PM)

    I found full blossom
    That might have witnessed seldom (Report) Reply

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