Facets Of Love. Poem by ritty patnaik

Facets Of Love.

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if love has to go
dont ask him why and where,
nor when to return,
it might slow step
backwards
to you.

a lifetime of moments
spent with him,
yet a whole life
may not be enough
to make him your very own!

love is such a game,
half life goes,
in chasing each other.
and the rest in pleasing
eachother.
happiness, fulfillment
dissatisfactions, anger
all have a role to play!

in the danger of losing,
one dies many deaths,
making love stronger
in the mantle of the heart.

love,
comes from the soul
touches the soul
binds both souls.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 14 September 2009

The facets of love has been concluded well in the last stanza! Involvement of two souls are necessary! But I liked your lighter side of 'chasing and pleasing'! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 07 September 2009

A true and wise wite Ritty!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 07 September 2009

lovely write Ritty, it's true that the people we love do not belong to us Milica xx

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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2009

ritty ji very nice poem...the well kept and well known secrets of soul to soul entanglement well written cheers

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