Failing Poem by Mia Ocean

Failing

Rating: 4.8


The feeling
in your stomach
that you get
when you fail,
is a flopping
throbbing,
sorrowful
feeling.

For those who care.

The feeling
in your head
that you get
when you fail,
is a head throbbing,
whydoievenbother kind of feeling.

For those who care.

The feeling
that you feel
when you fail,
is not a pleasent
iamgladibothered kind of feeling.

And i care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 31 January 2006

no confusion here wisdon here the great truth of living always live even in struggle a fine poem

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