hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,129 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Faithful - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Dog bites with full force
No one picks them and remove as unproductive force
People provide fool and easy shelter
In night time, they have vigilant gate keeper

No intruder is allowed in night time
The dog too chases strangers and warn owner in time
Useful and faithful animal available for small cost
Kept in street for keeping an eye with trust

Daytime is break with no movement
Little bark if that suits moment
Everybody may call with pet name
Even if bite somebody the also may warrant no blame

The dog is pet animal and loved by all
With sweet appearance, it pleases with call
Dog may respond with tail moving side ways
In short It is liked by all in different ways

Stray dogs too render same job
But they are chased and rally robbed
Of their share for regular food
Any how they make it good too

No doubt they are faithful and obedient
Not stop they appear and remain present
The house is looked after well with no outside danger
After all dogs have responsibility as good manager


Comments about Faithful by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2014 6:47:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2014 6:12:00 PM)

    Good


    Leanne Ferguson16 minutes ago
    Keep writing
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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2014 6:12:00 PM)

    although I appreciate the sentiment for dogs...


    Georgetown Murphy Pratt16 minutes ago
    ....the poem has a herky-jerky vibe to it. bits and pieces that don't fit. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2014 5:41:00 PM)

    Dog bite with full force
    No one picks them and remove as unproductive force (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 30, 2014


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