Favorable Response Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Favorable Response



Favorable response

K, you are right
I saw you in light
And wondered
About look and the way you appeared

Not all people impress
At first trace
I was fascinated
But got elated

Some of the women are really powerful
Not only in look wise have they looked cheerful
But leave behind lasting impression
So as to seek fresh and durable relation

As I got the word of acceptance
I felt no tense
As I was nearing an object
That was going to be live fact

I tried no more and kept silent
To know her reaction and comments
But it turned out to be favorable response
I smile across fence

Favorable Response
Thursday, July 6, 2017
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I tried no more and kept silent To know her reaction and comments But it turned out to be favorable response I smile across fence

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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