Ana Lia Zaldivar

Rookie (March 1,1994 / Honduras)

Fear - Poem by Ana Lia Zaldivar

Fear loses when I am close to you,
when I forget about what is loneliness,
but lately you are the one I fear,
now the world is my nightmare.

I've lost the one who protected me,
from all the fear which could rule in me,
now I am exposed,
to my nightmare every night, and everyday.

I fear what you've done to me,
I fear that's true,
that it's not just a nightmare,
that's just my reality.

I fear for it to happen again,
I fear the pain that have grown in my heart,
I fear for it to get worst,
I fear for it to take me to an end.

I fear not to have you one more time,
for our dreams to disappear for once and for all,
I fear for what's happening now,
and I fear it's not just a nightmare.


Comments about Fear by Ana Lia Zaldivar

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/18/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    fearing nightmares and realities both...face the realities strongwilled...there won't be any more nightmares...
    emotional write... it expresses the confused mind very well...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/19/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    the flow and sequence is perfect as well as the emotion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darkness J (2/5/2009 2:20:00 PM)

    It is a wonderful poem, I was drowning between the lines really. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Michael Gale (1/30/2009 1:59:00 PM)

    Great poem! I do believe that 'lonelyness, ' should be spelled, 'loneliness'.

    Yes-My spell checker has confirmed it. Always happy to help!

    God bless us all-MJG. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie J. P. Dullahan (1/24/2009 6:46:00 PM)

    Your poems are extremely passionate and direct. In spite of the fears and the darkness, they are bursting with life! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Desiree Burdick (1/17/2009 7:26:00 PM)

    i have alot of fears to :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 30, 2009


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