Different Worlds Poem by Ana Z. M.

Different Worlds

Rating: 3.5


We are living the same day,
We are breathing the same air,
But our hearts are just, in different worlds.

You seem to be so close,
but apparently you are far away,
you live in your world of adulthood,
and I live in my world of youth.

You've been changing your mind,
once and over again,
you've been coming and going,
you never stay.

But in my world I keep waiting,
for the day you'll stay,
maybe someday i'll be the one who goes to your world,
but I'm so afraid.

I'll be waiting for ever,
no matter in which of our worlds is,
I'll be loving you the same,
nothing in my heart will ever change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 25 January 2009

..ur expression is exquisitely true and laden with beauty..

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Bonnie Collins 29 January 2009

Very nice write, and filled with alot of expressive love, and emotion.... Love sometimes can be so enduring....... Loved this one alot.. Bonnie

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Matt Burgett 30 January 2009

Awww such a cute poem

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Noel Horlanda 22 September 2009

my heart bleeds, another tragic moment. When will this end? Surely this is one example of a true love, it never dies, never fade away, true love remains forever.For me I never have a woman who loves truly and so dedicated. I have four of them but not one. Cheers...

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Miriam Maia Padua 04 February 2009

lovely....very touching wonderfully written..so innocent.. a young heart falling in love.... age and place doesnt matter when love strikes.. your poems are beautiful..you are still young and i know you can achieve your dreams...a book of your poems....

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Darkness J 03 February 2009

Waw! Such a lovely touching poem!

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Andrew Blakemore 03 February 2009

A very sweet love poem demonstrating a talent well beyond your years. Best wishes, Andrew

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Anjali Sinha 02 February 2009

''I'll be waiting for ever, no matter in which of our worlds is, I'll be loving you the same, nothing in my heart will ever change.' another nice one from you anjali

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