Feeble Beauties Poem by mohanan viswambharan Nair

Feeble Beauties

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When the breeze blows and flows at dawn,
Swam of bees rise and float in the air.
Coming close, confiding to the flowers,
The lovers rouse them with a soft touch.
A poor flower having plunged down,
In the ornate love of a fickle-minded,
Gave away what was dear to her.
He left her in fainted sleep,
Gently, approached another.
Deceitful act! In ecstasy,
The distressed beauty called out to him.
None will like the act of sharing love to many-
Small thief! Aren't ashamed of stealing-
The pride of these feeble beauties?
I sat on the park bench having reflected
On the deceit of this paramour
Someone woke me up pulling my hand,
Dragged me across the narrow path!

Mohanan.V.Nair

Thursday, February 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 February 2019

A lovely wonderful poem, Mohanan.......10++++++

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Thanks a lot, Dear sir

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2019

rise and float in the air, great write

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Thanks a lot dear sir

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Rajnish Manga 21 February 2019

It's a great masterpiece presenting the two aspects of a man-woman relationship. Thanks, Dear Friend.

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Thanks a lot

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