Feel Proud And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel Proud And



Feel proud and

Wednesday, December 20,2017
6: 19 AM

I feel proud
And say it loudly
It is an irreparable loss
If you can't choose good friend

The world is meaningless
If you have nothing to chase
No friends are around
Whenyou fall to the ground

They are real asset
And doesn't allow or let
To slip out from your hand
Such is the trend from well-wishers

I always wanted
Close friends and chatted
To share their happiness and grief as well
The fragrance always I could smell

I find world so close
As someone will always pose
With their admirationand cleverness
I always feel happy in their company

Feel Proud And
Tuesday, December 19, 2017
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2017

Nicely said. Happy and proud to have good friends around making the world seem close and cosy. Enjoyed the beautifully composed poem Hasmukhji! Gomathi Mohan, Dec 20,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2017

Beautiful response Gandikota sir! How to respond is also an art and is very much a part of writing. The poem indeed is beautiful with a potential to connect, it has also been written with care. Thank you. Supratik Sen, Dec 20,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 December 2017

Friendship for ever.. Fails you never.. R R Gandikota, Dec 20,2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2017

I find world so close As someone will always pose With their admiration and cleverness I always feel happy in their company

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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