Feel The Real Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel The Real

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Feel the real
Monday,25th March 2019

It is really wonderful
and feel the real
when something is not doing well
our heart is left alone to tell

my heart aches
and pinches
me to react
with sad act

My past has slipped away
yet I stay
with beautiful memory
and always pray an almighty

I am really grieved
and believed
that it was really heaven
and I remain purely driven

it is flirting with a bad omen
and it is not good for a woman
I am unable to take a fresh breath even
In such kind of feeling, I had never been

Will you correct me?
and make me feel free
from the trauma of the past?
I wish that it must last

Hasmukh Mehta

Feel The Real
Sunday, March 24, 2019
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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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