mina lotfi

Feeling - Poem by mina lotfi

On the darkness night
It will die, a lighten lamp
It is so far
Morning is near
Feel of being
Smell of staying
Writing me, between night lines
It is time to reach

Comments about Feeling by mina lotfi

  • Gold Star - 7,724 Points Tiku . (6/18/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    nice drop.sort of philosophical thought. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,583 Points Luis Estable (5/31/2015 4:12:00 AM)

    To be honest, I did not get much from this try. It seems as if the end of this poem makes this effort imcomplete.

    You call the poem Feeling, but the title offered me not much help. It could be that I am not thinking clearly this early in the morning, but whatever the case may be, I like that you tried to give your best it seems.

    keep on wriitng!

    Luis Estable (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 31, 2015

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