Feeling Poem by heather something

Feeling

Rating: 5.0


How can you be so close to someone
&It dont mean nothing, you don't see what in front of you,
your eyes closed, you're blind, but not to the feeling.
You took it from me, took my loving.
Don't let it go on for too long if your body doesn't want it,
but oh yes.. My body wants it.
I knew not to do it, but I did it anyway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K J 10 July 2011

Maybe you pushed that someone away and now they don't know what to expect from you in future... Rated 10

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K J 10 July 2011

Nice and full of feeling. But did you think.. that maybe you are the reason the other person might be a little apprehensive..Think of the possible reasons for it.. Rated 10

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