Feelings Poem by Vaibhav sagar
Feelings
When I Am Glad, You Are In My Smile…
When I Am Sad, You Are In My Tears…
When I Am Walking, You Are In My Steps…
When I Am Sleeping, You Are In My Dreams…
I Think These Are Special Feelings
If I Were An Artist, I Would Paint My Feelings…
If I Were A Poet, I Would Quote My Feelings…
But I Am An Ordinary Person
So I Just Say
I LOVE YOU! !
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The first seven lines especially shined, the seventh 'If I Were A Poet, I Would Quote My Feelings…' would read better as 'If I Were A Poet, I Would Write My Feelings…' and the ninth line as 'So I Will Just Say' :) Just my opinion, write and I will read :)
Beatiful poem with wonderful rhyme and reasoning. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Beautiful romantic piece of poetry depicting the essence of love - a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Vaibhav. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.