Fervent Secrets Poem by Sandra Feldman

Fervent Secrets

Rating: 5.0


Weary, Weary are the Wise,
That try to summarize
Life, our World,
The Universe,
In written form,
For it is so full of
Mystery,
So full of dissonant
Theory and History
That Truth
Somehow lies hidden,
Confused and bedridden,
Known, for sure
By none...
Information,
Hidden by deep secrets
Since this World was formed,
And long ago, begun,
Its mysterious secret life
Under the Star of Light,
Which is, the Sun.

Wednesday, February 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beginning,life,mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 February 2020

Man’s life will be meaningful if he recognizes the Creator of the universe. Great poem, dear Ma’am Sandra...10++💕

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 February 2020

A well composed and conveyed write. Very perceptive. Yes, life/ existence is indeed a mystery. A never ending quest. The more we dig into it, the more we are confused. A unique thought and a poem of great depth. Beautifully written.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 February 2020

everything of this world so mysterious but under the brightest Sun!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

Ardent poem about Fervent Secrets Aptly worded in this form Love for poetry is the norm Mystery, So full of dissonant Theory and History I read this with much plezant (oleasure) .WOW! Dearest Sandra, An immense pleasure to read this treasure indeed an amazing treat is this loveliest read.........a 10 TOP Score and much much more Enjoyed enormously this oh so beautiful poesié fondest, Sylvie

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