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Fervid Desire Within

Rhyme on my heart
Feel the lines apart
Metrical at the start
Beautiful sensation will impart

Life is like a verse
Rhythm is not a curse
Intonations on me immerse
Within my art coerce

Unseen essence all-important
Behind syllables enchant
Beyond prose is significant
Imaginations are deeply radiant

Good sound of words with hope
Soothe with the moments of peace
Stood with the speech of truth
Put resonance and exciting love

Give meaningful rage and passion,
Live connected with ardent and zealous
Give warmth and fervid desire
Live, forgive and outlive with a poem

Submitted: Monday, April 22, 2013
Edited: Sunday, November 17, 2013

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I wrote this at home. I dedicate this poem to all poet and the poetry itself.

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  • Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:01:00 PM)

    ..........a beautiful poem narrating the impact of a poem on the poet and reader itself..............lovely write

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  • Shania K. Younce (12/26/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    I like how you put the title in your poem and gave it a whole surounding.

  • Monica Rupazo (12/6/2013 11:56:00 PM)

    This gives a powerful touching lesson on living life peacefully with others, in terms of forgiveness

  • Wilfred Arzaga (11/25/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    a very unique composition :)

  • Mary Amrutha (11/24/2013 1:43:00 AM)

    nice poem... keep going

  • Pradip Dasgupta (11/12/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    lovely poem.great write

  • Queeny Gona (11/11/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem!
    Heart of the read I loved it the most!

  • Humera Sultana (11/10/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem - lovely lines

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem nice poem

    it may increase
    improve the life chance
    think of poems at once

  • Ramesh Rai (10/28/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem, poetry has no depth. keep it up my friend. a great write.

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