herbert guitang


Fervid Desire Within - Poem by herbert guitang

Rhyme on my heart
Feel the lines apart
Metrical at the start
Beautiful sensation will impart

Life is like a verse
Rhythm is not a curse
Intonations on me immerse
Within my art coerce

Unseen essence all-important
Behind syllables enchant
Beyond prose is significant
Imaginations are deeply radiant

Good sound of words with hope
Soothe with the moments of peace
Stood with the speech of truth
Put resonance and exciting love

Give meaningful rage and passion,
Live connected with ardent and zealous
Give warmth and fervid desire
Live, forgive and outlive with a poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this at home. I dedicate this poem to all poet and the poetry itself.

Comments about Fervid Desire Within by herbert guitang

  • Rookie - 242 Points Nancy Oyula (1/16/2015 12:27:00 AM)

    Your rhyme scheme is so on point, Herbert: -) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    Great lines.......Soothe with the moments of peace
    Beyond prose is significant
    Beautiful sensation will impart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Anne Mayz (5/5/2014 9:30:00 AM)

    ....Immensely beautiful and radiantly beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 3:27:00 AM)

    WONDERFUL LINES, BEST POEM
    Give warmth and fervid desire
    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jose Santos (5/1/2014 7:25:00 AM)

    An ardent and zealous poem to remember. So unique poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,358 Points John Westlake (4/27/2014 8:23:00 PM)

    A worthy dedication I must say.. Live, forgive and outlive with a poem, a timely reminder of respect and honesty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jessica Hernandez-damian (4/25/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    Its a lovely poem.
    Live, forgive, and outlive with a poem
    I really like this line. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:01:00 PM)

    ..........a beautiful poem narrating the impact of a poem on the poet and reader itself..............lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Shania K. Younce (12/26/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    I like how you put the title in your poem and gave it a whole surounding. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 64 Points Monica Rupazo (12/6/2013 11:56:00 PM)

    This gives a powerful touching lesson on living life peacefully with others, in terms of forgiveness (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wilfred Arzaga (11/25/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    a very unique composition :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Mary Amrutha (11/24/2013 1:43:00 AM)

    nice poem... keep going (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pradip Dasgupta (11/12/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    lovely poem.great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Queeny Gona (11/11/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem!
    Heart of the read I loved it the most! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Humera Sultana (11/10/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem - lovely lines (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    Live, forgive and outlive with a poem nice poem

    it may increase
    improve the life chance
    think of poems at once (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,589 Points Ramesh Rai (10/28/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem, poetry has no depth. keep it up my friend. a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (10/27/2013 8:58:00 AM)

    A beautiful summing up of what a poem is and what impact a poem should leave on the poet himself and the reader! The poem is made effective with its sound effect too! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,779 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/10/2013 4:21:00 PM)

    Love the last line - live, forgive and outlive with a poem. Our poems will outlive us, it is true. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points marvin brato (10/1/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    Indeed, poem give warmth and passion, . Absolute expression human can ever do! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 17, 2013


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