Herbert Guitang


I’m In Love With You - Poem by Herbert Guitang

Your Stanzas are like your eyes that melts my heart
Your Lines are like your smile that softens my inner being
Your Themes are like your unique gestures that make me fall with you
You Titles are like your special message that deepens to know you more

VERSE me with your care
ODE me with your embrace
RHYME me with your share
PROSE me with your tender

I’m in love with you because you FLOW
like spring in the falls
I’m in love with you because your SYLLABLES
are like a zephyr in the skies
I’m in love with you because your RHYTHM
are like the heartbeat of blissful happiness
I’m in love with you because your METER
is like the immeasurable galaxies of passion

I’m in love with you, POETRY

Form: Ars Poetica


Comments about I’m In Love With You by Herbert Guitang

  • Freshman - 972 Points Nisar Masoom (7/18/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    One of the most romantic verses I've ever read. Brilliant! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points C. P. Sharma (7/17/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    Wonderful love with the Muse. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 222 Points Nicole Anne Sia (6/21/2015 6:16:00 PM)

    Now that's poetry! Truly amazing! ;) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,451 Points Akachukwu Lekwauwa (6/7/2015 7:55:00 AM)

    This is classic Ars Poetica. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 102 Points Naial Oniblab (6/5/2015 2:38:00 AM)

    I'm in love with poetry, too. This poem really tickles my heart and thought. At first, it seems that your in love with someone but at the end I realized that you're in love with POETRY...you have a unique style of writing poems... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,676 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/27/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    Haha..i was caught off-guarded at the ending.. I thought it was a person
    And I reread and there I saw how I missed the clue words
    I like this poem
    It also made me smile
    Mabuhay. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,363 Points Allotey Abossey (5/22/2015 7:39:00 AM)

    I'm in love with your poem, poet Herbert.. God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    that deepens to know you more.. nice one...10
    expect more
    and learn too more
    it shall then add
    and strengthen your trade (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,345 Points Sandra Feldman (5/13/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    You're love for poetry is excellently and passionately portrayed, in this poem.
    Very inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Henry Garcia (5/8/2015 11:29:00 PM)

    One of the best I've ever read. Beautiful creation (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,941 Points Points Of View (10/14/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    Akala ko ito'y para sa iyong minamahal..Mahusay ang pag ikot ng iyong tula! Binabati kita.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 103 Points Ana Rose Trazo (8/5/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    poetry is a window where i can freely see whatever i want to see and shout whatever i want to say. i'm also inlove top it. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 8,051 Points Herbert Guitang (8/8/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful words from you, Poet Ana Rose Trazo

  • Rookie - 288 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/16/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Wow! Excellently written poem and the wording is just amazing Herbert. Really enjoyed reading this well penned poem and thank you for your comments on ma poems, I appreciate dear poet.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 129 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/16/2014 9:57:00 PM)

    beautifully written, nice composition.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    ......Perfectly DONE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 10:11:00 AM)

    A Great contribution in the name of highest POETRY (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Anne Mayz (5/5/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    In the name of Love in Poetry. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 3:35:00 AM)

    You are full of surprises. The last line is GREAT and SUPERB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jose Santos (5/1/2014 7:41:00 AM)

    Very impressive on this poem. Captivating and Enchanting poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Jei Yu (5/1/2014 6:20:00 AM)

    Nice poem! , poignant in a sense. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 21, 2015


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