hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,810 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Field Day - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Front broken
From rear everything is stolen
Sides are exposed
Trust is not reposed

Can’t be work of thieves
As we believe
Insider’s job
Just planned to rob

This is how it happens
In day light even
Information is passed
Security is out classed

Some groups work
With promised word
To steal hard earned treasure
To make their future

Simple tactics work on card
Pre survey is made in wards
Easy target is chosen
Locks and doors are broken

Valuables are taken away
Useless items thrown on the way
Person is robbed off his valuables
Had it saved after great struggle

Thieves have field day
It has come in easy way
Few days may be spent with joy
Then next round to enjoy more


Comments about Field Day by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2013 11:25:00 PM)

    Evilish


    Christopher Conwell43 minutes ago
    A positive outlook on crime
    Maybe one is the victic
    Either way I like it
    Evilish


    Christopher Conwell43 minutes ago
    A positive outlook on crime
    Maybe one is the victic
    Either way I like it (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2013 10:38:00 PM)

    like it


    Anna Laurencio6 minutes ago
    yes, I like it.4 stars for you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2013 9:15:00 PM)

    Front broken
    From rear everything is stolen (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 3, 2013


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