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fight soldier fight

Bang Bang Bang
fight soldier fight

Kill Kill Kill
fight soldier fight

Pain Pain Pain
fight soldier fight

Blood Blood Blood
fight soldier fight

Breathe Breathe Breathe
fight soldier fight

Still Still Still
sleep soldier sleep

Submitted: Monday, June 29, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, July 01, 2009


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  • Sharon Herzog (2/19/2011 9:21:00 PM)

    Jason, I love the style that you used in this poem, such a powerful meaning..thanks

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  • Intensive Ks (1/3/2010 4:49:00 AM)

    jason:

    All this BS about 'fight Soldier for your country', is nothing but authorized 'kill, kill, kill or be killed'.....but how can we look into the FACE of DEATH? ? ? Why are WE MADE THE INSTRUMENTS OF DEATH? ? IS IT FAIR? ? CAN WE NOT BE REPULSED BY THIS MADNESS INCULCATED IN OUR MINDS? ? ?

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