buried.............I am,
under the grave of expectation.
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waiting...........I am,
to butcher the ghost of obligation.
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unleashing......I am,
from the shackles of dogmatisation.
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progressing.....I am,
to the path of liberation.
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living.............I am,
now,
finally at peace.
Short, small, yet so powerful, meaningful, and thought provoking.
words with strong feelings..........short n much powerful......thanks for sharing........sebastine
nice verses..contemplation well expressed in achieving peace..
Vaibhav, Peace is one state that many seek and never find it's sad they can't see that when freed from the artificial constructs of man, then one is at peace. I guess people get too caught up in the ways of the world. Very introspective and contemplating. A real thinker for sure. Thanks for sharing.10+
finally you got peace, the only aim of human existence.extremely well written.poem, focused in the right direction! god bless you. ritty
wow.....this is a very calm and peaceful poem........ sincerely expressed. thank you very much.
There is no doubt about the quality of this poem. I loved the poem and the structure. This is a great poem. Bravo! GW62
Finally........ a simple wise poem has come out of muddly words.... Good job Vaibhav!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The style is good...concept wonderful. I liked it so much.