So naked I stood in front of you
Full of hope and full of fear
Locked in your arms I slept that night
Loneliness was no longer real
Your breath carressed strands of my hair
Your palms touched my hungry skin
It was an evening of hurting hearts
That life has put together to heal.
Very nice, except that the very last word should be HEAL instead of HEEL.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice narration and word choice