Only When Awoken Poem by Joanna Pavlides

Only When Awoken

Rating: 5.0


The road taken so many times
Losing yourself
And then trying to leave it all behind

The excitement mixed with fear
Trembling of flame
Pondering about things being real

Sound of flowing stream so often broken
Random words heard
And one left wondering whether they were spoken

Fragile calm disturbed by one's breathing
Needs breed more hunger
Sight of control becoming deceiving

All those life's little gift tokens
Sometimes given sometimes stolen
Picked up on that very road only when we are awoken

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 15 January 2013

Lovely write, especially the last verse which is very meaningful.

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Jovan Lopez 13 January 2013

will said nice poem i like it

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Colin Bradley 03 January 2013

well done I especially love the last line it finish the poem perfectly

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