Some metaphors are outside
But inside its suffocation
Started as a lively cell
Carved the structure in persistence
Swathe inside a cubicle
But the breathe was rhythmic
Try to smash it at once
But the time castle was fortified
There the shadow speak myself
Sometimes knock with all the verve
But the fort never broken
Some wonder at its shake
Some enjoyed its magic
Only way was to praise thee
It's the grooming section of life
There teaches the rhymes in order
That melody in next phase
Then to the world of wonders
There take it as it comes! ! !
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Beautiful poem Salini. You have presented each steps beautifully, the life inside womb.. Loved reading it.
It's the grooming section of life There teaches the rhymes in order That melody in next phase Then to the world of wonders There take it as it comes! ! ! A philosophic poem.
Shaping of one's life since the time of conception very delicately penned.......well done Salini........very nice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Learning ability from cradle to cradle love the poem