Flowers Poem by Jordan Cristal

Flowers

Rating: 4.5


Flowers are short lived,
just like the events we have.
Its color will fade,
just like the feelings we have.

Its aroma diminishes,
just like the things we have.
Its splendor gone,
just like the moments we have.

But memories are cherished,
just like the love we have.
It will lasts forever,
just like the ONE I have.

Saturday, January 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love reading poems ever since I read one, this is my first poem to be posted online. I need some comments please and guidance to improve my next one.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 January 2015

A good poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Your employment of similes to drive home your convictions is both appropriate and poetically remarkable. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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David Hockaday 10 January 2015

I loved it. Keep up the good work. You can read my poem I submitted today and comment on my poem if you want to. I really likede the first four lines, how clever

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Jordan Cristal

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