Fogmented London! ! Poem by Geoff Warden

Fogmented London! !

Rating: 5.0


Like the end of time
and unto a new day
it enveloped all

the thick density of
a bellowing cloud
that surrounded him.

Through unclarity a lite
cut as glass strips
hearing the faint call

Could this be for real
could the beckoning arise

For answers destiny lies
as the fog thickens
and times play marches on

Yet only one reveals
unto the waiting of
and unto the final completion.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deanna More 12 February 2007

''Fogmented London'' - (clever title!) A very visual poem! Superb imagery. Reader's thought-processing, takes action. A very unique poem. (Love your style!) ........Deanna xx .

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Diane Violet 30 January 2007

Clarity or clouded vision...it's been a tad bit foggy out here on the isle! Final completion...final decision! Of course this is just my personal take on this finely written piece! .....................Diane

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Not a member No 4 30 January 2007

Mystery at every turn. Darkness may be filled with surprises. An interesting and intriguingly open piece of writing. We can imagine whatever suits us almost. Clever and very poetic.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 January 2007

Sir G, >>>>TIGHT, CRISP STRUCTURE...fine crafting, undeed.. F. j. R.

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Tranquil Ocean 30 January 2007

Nature bellows fog at either test our clarity of vision or to cloud our vision....same thing with the fog of the mind... Profound thoughts in th emorning, Geoff! ! ! Love...TO

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Geoff Warden

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London Ontario Canada
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