hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 30,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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It is unfair not to judge
And remain lazy to manage
The thing for sure
Can not be taken for unsure

It is certain
And always maintain
You are on short journey
Carved out by an almighty

Be kind or unkind
And keep not in my mind
It shall be decided later on
When your time has gone

You shall weep
For unable to keep
Pace with time
Now no use to lament at this time

Acknowledge that with human aspect
It all depends on noble act
"Good or bad death" remains unexplained
The secret about it is yet to be learnt

No one shall be spared
But that shall not be fared too
It is routine and casual
It is destined for each individual

Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome rhiani daud, dewi mrawiawan nd shla dominic, jairam ji
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:56:00 PM)

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    xSo true...11 minutes ago by JodekssGloatkenf| Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:54:00 PM)

    The Vedic poems and the bibles Song of Solomon in the book of Psalms, the story of Gilgamesh too all poems from antiquity on. You seem to be on to something, ......16 seconds ago by justArun|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:54:00 PM)

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    xI get this. after all, Jesus was a Buddhist monk who felt the presence of a God, which was probably a spiritual feeling of enlightenment.7 minutes ago by Wyatt Walker
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:53:00 PM)

    This is great, the beat goes well with the poem.4 hours ago by Arielle Ponder|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:53:00 PM)

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    xThe sensual nature of your words are so inspiring. It's like the shadows themselves mold the very romance you long to provide.1 hour ago by LestatdeLioncourt|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    Sorry to rain on your parade, but you're notthe devil.You're actually an angel called Lucifer who is destined to becomethe devil sometime in the future. You're notthe devil, you're a bearer of light.The most beautiful angel that ever was, before the light went out.4hoursagobyJoshuaMarshall|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:52:00 PM)

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    xWhat I actually intended to bring out in this poem was the idea that denial of corruption is the power of the world.And how are we saying that power of individuals rule the world, if given that explanation.2 hours ago by It's Estuvalante
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    Not your best work, Drummer Boy. What happened to all your spoken word? 2 minutes ago by Lady Vela|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:51:00 PM)

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    xHhhhmmm....3 hours ago byAtypical Blonde
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:50:00 PM)

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    xI respect everyone for their own beliefs, all Isimply like to do is tell people about what I believe in and the n its up to them to choose, I don't judge them for not believing what I believe, I just show and tell what I know, just do what you believe to be right for you: -) 4hoursagobyDonJohnson|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:49:00 PM)

    Great Mrinmoy Choudhury8 minutes ago Very meaningful and sweet too - I loved reading it. Comment +1 22 Jun by (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:49:00 PM)

    Haha, thanks guys, this is what I love about this site. Even when the more depressed side of me writes, somebody always knows how to make me feel a little better.1 hour ago by snazzyCAT..|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:48:00 PM)

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    xI like the last stanza. Good poem! :) 1 hour ago by snazzyCAT..|Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:47:00 PM)

    Good question! Katherine Spence11 minutes ago Poem about love, and why we even bother. Good thoughts Comment +1 22 Jun by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:47:00 PM)

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    xI like it Maria Rock11 minutes ago I think you mean matters. Comment +1 22 Jun by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:46:00 PM)

    Whatever this is, it is not Scripture. At least when the devil tempted Jesus, he quoted the words correctly from Scripture. The fourthin the furnace was Jesus, whom Nebuchadnezzer rightly identified as the Son of God(Daniel 3: 25) .Much of what is written above appears to be taken and twisted from Scripture, but is not accurately quoted.Do remember that Jesus is the Creator, and that all things, even the devil, are created beings. Martin Luther was right...Even the devil is God's devil.With Joshua, I choose to serve the Lord God Jehovah, the Triune God who says, in Isaiah 43: 10, You are my witnesses, declares the LORD, and my servant whom I have chosen, so that you may know and believe me and understand that I am he.Before me no god was formed, nor will there be one after me.3 hours ago by Don Bouchard |Reply 50 minutes ago by ?? ???'s [3 | Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:43:00 PM)

    Amitava Sur (6/22/2014 12: 26: 00 PM) a lovely poem in cautioning people to be away frm wrong doings.... very nice (Report) 1 hour ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
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  • Gold Star - 30,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/23/2014 11:42:00 PM)

    23 Jun by Lucifer. | Reply
    picture of ?? ???'s [3
    xWhatever this is, it is not Scripture. At least when the devil tempted Jesus, he quoted the words correctly from Scripture. The fourthin the furnace was Jesus, whom Nebuchadnezzer rightly identified as the Son of God(Daniel 3: 25) .Much of what is written above appears to be taken and twisted from Scripture, but is not accurately quoted.Do remember that Jesus is the Creator, and that all things, even the devil, are created beings. Martin Luther was right...Even the devil is God's devil.With Joshua, I choose to serve the Lord God Jehovah, the Triune God who says, in Isaiah 43: 10, You are my witnesses, declares the LORD, and my servant whom I have chosen, so that you may know and believe me and understand that I am he.Before me no god was formed, nor will there be one after me.3hoursagobyDonBouchard|Reply
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