When happiness never comes,
when hope walks out the door,
when you've finally given up,
when you can't take anymore.
When you feel life has left you stranded,
because living means nothing but pain.
When courage has left you standing,
when you can't go on another day.
When the tale-tell signs of sadness,
have come for vengeance on your soul,
When weariness becomes madness,
when depression takes its toll.
I have but one thing to ask,
in the the end of all that is right:
Please, choose to live,
for me, fight this fight.
it starts off like the lil story thing you just wrote, i like it, the end ties everything together nicely
Written with strength and encouragement. Well written and full of a positive message for hope. Nice. Deborah Cromer
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When the tale-tell signs of sadness, have come for vengeance on your soul, When weariness becomes madness, when depression takes its toll. swweetly written, the way of writing is romantic and the expressin is very much poetic and impressive..heart feeling and soul touching effect..metaphor and can visualize too.. well done..liked it..10/10