Craig Mize

Rookie - 16 Points (06/17/1980 / gainesville GA)

For One More Day


If I had just one more day, that smile would never go away,
And I'll make sure that this would be a better day.
Hold you tight and wipe away them tears of sorrow,
I know that it's raining today, but I'll promise a brighter tomorrow

If I had just one more day I'll show you that I loved you in every way
Prove to you that your beauty always brighten my days.
I would spoil you with all of the love in my heart,
And promise you that my love, this true love is here to stay

But the time has come for us to part different ways
You shall go on and live a grand live and in heaven I'll spend my days
Looking down on you from above, reminiscing about your lovely face
Just waiting patiently to hold you in my arms if only for one more day

Submitted: Saturday, July 17, 2010
Edited: Saturday, February 08, 2014

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (7/27/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    A beautiful composition on the truest of emotions! Keep writing and sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Lalitha iyer (7/23/2010 10:53:00 PM)

    If only I had one more day,
    no, one more hour
    nay, one more minute
    I would have told you
    that the lines are very touching.......... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (7/23/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    ooo...what a wonderful pieces u gave to us! ...the end really stabbed my heart, sad but beautiful..if i have some magical wishes to make it true, i will wish u will have another day with her, save the love and make all your word above come true..thanks for sharing.. sweet lullaby (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jamelia Lane (7/18/2010 10:42:00 PM)

    aww this madde me cry becuase i feel the same way: '( i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Felicia Garcia (7/18/2010 10:40:00 PM)

    dang thats deep thats what you call a true couple that has true love keep writin your poems are very good: *) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poetic Soul (7/18/2010 9:47:00 PM)

    Well-penned....eloquently expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *_sakura ~daisy_* (7/18/2010 9:44:00 PM)

    Your heart speaks the dearing words of a lovely poem that showers with longing...and sadness...and content for life...yes, one more day could make a change and make things even better... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Miss Rainbow (7/18/2010 7:40:00 PM)

    thats really sad i think that in time people heal not completely but enough to stay alive (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alicia Moore (7/17/2010 11:43:00 PM)

    Aw sad at the end but happy at the same time: '] BEAUTIFUL! ! ! (Report) Reply

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