Kevin Patrick

Silver Star - 3,365 Points (Taurus / Ontario)

Foreign Terrestrials - Poem by Kevin Patrick

We speak the same language
...But...
Interpret different nuances

And our expressions seem related
...Except...
They are foreign and divergent

The manner of our stride is similar
...However...
Our Body language lacks connection

And we laugh, and we hurt, and we cry
...Alas...
Adapted to alternative wavelengths

There is something that makes us human
Unfortunately
Nature constructed us to be Foreign Terrestrials

But that's o.k.
Because I have a dictionary


Poet's Notes about The Poem

For people who are aspies this is dedicated to you

Comments about Foreign Terrestrials by Kevin Patrick

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (3/13/2013 7:00:00 AM)

    A good write capturing the tangent between those with the condition and those without. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,246 Points Valerie Dohren (3/2/2013 6:41:00 AM)

    Shows an in-depth understanding of Aspergers Syndrome - well penned Kevin. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 2, 2013


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