Forest Sprite Ii Poem by Linda Ori

Forest Sprite Ii

Rating: 3.2


Wandering down the wooded path,
A sparkle 'neath a tree
Captures my attention -
A forest sprite I see;

Lounging on a lilly pad
Adrift upon a pool,
A tiny fairy suns herself
By waters clear and cool;

She seems to be asleeping
So still her form does lie,
Yet I detect a whisper
As I quietly pass by;

'Come close that I may see you,
For secrets I've to tell' -
She spoke to me so softly
Like the tinkling of a bell;

'It's magic that I offer,
I'm equal to the task -
I shall grant you one fine wish,
You've only but to ask';

'Then, I shall ask for wisdom
To help me find the way
To open up my mind and let
My spirit out to play';

Then with a tiny giggle
She fluttered all around,
And all the answers came to me
Without a single sound;

My mind had been awakened
As if by lightning speed,
And with her little magic spell
My spirit had been freed;

Now to this day I wonder
Just how this came to be,
To come upon a fairy sprite
While walking 'neath the trees

In some enchanted forest -
That day a spell was cast
My heart was touched by magic -
Forever it will last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

And there was me thinking that Forest Sprite I couldn't be bettered.... L, this is utterly enchanting and magical, and exquisitely written. A fairytale for children or an inspired spark of hope for adults? 'Tis both. t x

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Tailor Bell 23 August 2006

a sequel to be reckoned with and right fine pair of fairy verses. these ARE enchanting. splendid works. -Tailor

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

'Tis time for a series, midnight....I want to see it...you can do it....it'll ROCK! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Very enchanting! ! ! ! another ten! ! ! !

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David Harris 03 April 2007

Linda, I wish I could come across that sprite so she could grant a wish for me. Another very enchanting poem. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Alison Cassidy 26 August 2006

After reading your first Forest Sprite, I was delighted to see that you had written another - this one is just as enchanting and fantastical as the first, full of childlike wonder and optimism. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Danny Reynolds 24 August 2006

; ¬) Danny

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Tranquil Ocean 23 August 2006

Enchanting! ! ! ! ! Mesmerizing...Lovely visuals...I can picture them perfect! Thanks so much for sharing....

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