Forever A Path (For Lynn) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Forever A Path (For Lynn)

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The scythe shone
in the sun

lapped at the whetstone
to sharpen its appetite

it sang
in my uncle's hands

swung through space & time

beholding thistles & nettles

I laughed
following at a careful distance

as the wilderness
fell before his step

& the easy
swung sung motion

of its shining

like a little God
bringing death & destruction

to the years
that had flowered
& flourished
into glorious weeds

beautiful in themselves.

Now the sky
& clouds

moved into the emptiness
created

opening
forever a path

into summer
& time.

* * * * * * *

SUMMER HOLIDAYS

The house
had been
asleep

but had awakened

startled out of its dreamings

by the sound of children’s feet
& the scrabble of voices.

The sunlight
had been dragged in

the open door

where it sat shyly
at table

partaking in
the little human’s

open enjoyment
of time

and what
it would bring

this newly
minted morning

this summer
of holy days.

* * * * * *


PICKING EGGS

The sun comes
& sits

at the end of the bench

nearest the door

strokes Sam
the collie.

It waits for me
to eat
my soldiers & boiled egg

that has just come
out of a hen

not so long ago

& which I gathered
in a basket

by myself.

'Picking eggs! '
I called it.

Milk cools
in a churn

I can smell
the top cream

from here

the big clock
ticks out big
tocks

Sam
whimpers in a dream

chasing the unseen

outside is summer
& a future

that stretches as far as
forever

& a present

that can never

...end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 14 January 2008

The perfection of the word painting here...of summer being dragged indoors and sitting at the table with the little human...is beyond compare, as are all your thoughts and memories of such a happy, happy childhood. The greatest treasure of all...a happy childhood...and you tell it perfectly!

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Dee Dee Wright 09 January 2008

Beautiful evocation of a time that lives forever in the mind in such pristine remembering. Opening a path into summer indeed. Marvellous and wonderful

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Scarlett Treat 08 January 2008

What a wonderful experience this is, to have followed that path into 'forever summer...and time.' I am so proud that you and I share this love for 'what was, and will never be again...' The way we grew up, country kids, both of us, and following those paths into summertime cannot be duplicated with modern mechanical tractors, for the softness of the time has changed, hasn't it? Thank you, dearest Donall, for the dedication, for you know I love your work, and I am honored that you thought of me.

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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