LaRon Green Sr.

Rookie - 41 Points (Washington DC)

Forever And A Day - Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

Forever and a day
I must say
I love you
Forever and a day
I will say
I miss you
Forever and a day
It's lonely without you
Forever and a day
I pray that you forgive me
for going astray
Forever and a day
I apologize
for what trouble
I have cause
Forever and a day
I hope
you are willing to stay
Forever and a day
I am yours
I am willing to stay
Forever and a day
life will be better
I must say
Forever and a day
I am and always was yours
Forever and a day
I will not leave you
I am here through
think and thin
and everything within
Forever and a day
It's no one
that will or cannot
take your place
Forever and a day
I married you
until death do us part
Forever and a day
lets pray
for this lovely day
I am yours
forever, for always, for love
Forever and a day


Comments about Forever And A Day by LaRon Green Sr.

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (2/4/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    i should tell you i really like the structure of the poem; and in that structure how sweetly you have conveyed your message! ! ! very good! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,161 Points Is It Poetry (6/6/2009 11:01:00 AM)

    yes, So you have transversed the dev's of the hearts...fever and a day is a while, to make amends for a thought of a smile..some times you just have to winks about it awhile in rest and upon her sway again her mime....iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Appleblossoms 2009 (4/7/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    So, you made use of the repetitive style....it's okey. Just keep me posted for your funny poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dillon Crawford (4/5/2009 11:01:00 AM)

    It is a lovely poem about true love. To want to be with somebody for that long is amazing. It is a beautiful use of imagery.
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Martine Kolber (3/18/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, the repetition makes it even more touching! I like it; -)
    Take care, Martine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (3/17/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    forever and ever
    a lovely one
    smooth flow throughout
    i like your style
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2009



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