Forever and a day
I must say
I love you
Forever and a day
I will say
I miss you
Forever and a day
It's lonely without you
Forever and a day
I pray that you forgive me
for going astray
Forever and a day
I apologize
for what trouble
I have cause
Forever and a day
I hope
you are willing to stay
Forever and a day
I am yours
I am willing to stay
Forever and a day
life will be better
I must say
Forever and a day
I am and always was yours
Forever and a day
I will not leave you
I am here through
think and thin
and everything within
Forever and a day
It's no one
that will or cannot
take your place
Forever and a day
I married you
until death do us part
Forever and a day
lets pray
for this lovely day
I am yours
forever, for always, for love
Forever and a day
i should tell you i really like the structure of the poem; and in that structure how sweetly you have conveyed your message! ! ! very good! !
yes, So you have transversed the dev's of the hearts...fever and a day is a while, to make amends for a thought of a smile..some times you just have to winks about it awhile in rest and upon her sway again her mime....iip
So, you made use of the repetitive style....it's okey. Just keep me posted for your funny poems.
It is a lovely poem about true love. To want to be with somebody for that long is amazing. It is a beautiful use of imagery. 10/10
Lovely poem, the repetition makes it even more touching! I like it; -) Take care, Martine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
forever and ever a lovely one smooth flow throughout i like your style -10 anjali