Forever And A Day Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

Forever And A Day

Rating: 5.0


Forever and a day
I must say
I love you
Forever and a day
I will say
I miss you
Forever and a day
It's lonely without you
Forever and a day
I pray that you forgive me
for going astray
Forever and a day
I apologize
for what trouble
I have cause
Forever and a day
I hope
you are willing to stay
Forever and a day
I am yours
I am willing to stay
Forever and a day
life will be better
I must say
Forever and a day
I am and always was yours
Forever and a day
I will not leave you
I am here through
think and thin
and everything within
Forever and a day
It's no one
that will or cannot
take your place
Forever and a day
I married you
until death do us part
Forever and a day
lets pray
for this lovely day
I am yours
forever, for always, for love
Forever and a day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 17 March 2009

forever and ever a lovely one smooth flow throughout i like your style -10 anjali

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Deep Mukherjee 04 February 2012

i should tell you i really like the structure of the poem; and in that structure how sweetly you have conveyed your message! ! ! very good! !

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James Mclain 06 June 2009

yes, So you have transversed the dev's of the hearts...fever and a day is a while, to make amends for a thought of a smile..some times you just have to winks about it awhile in rest and upon her sway again her mime....iip

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Appleblossoms 2009 07 April 2009

So, you made use of the repetitive style....it's okey. Just keep me posted for your funny poems.

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Dillon Crawford 05 April 2009

It is a lovely poem about true love. To want to be with somebody for that long is amazing. It is a beautiful use of imagery. 10/10

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Martine Kolber 18 March 2009

Lovely poem, the repetition makes it even more touching! I like it; -) Take care, Martine

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