LaRon Green Sr.

Rookie - 41 Points (Washington DC)

I Am Tired Of Being A Secret - Poem by LaRon Green Sr.

Why I have to hide
from others
when I am
your husband
and better then
those that look at me
like a burning oven
they are no better
then me
they are in so much misery
you need to check their
background
before you let their
talk put me on a board
like old chalk
their past
why their relationship
didn't last long
being in other people business
why there's didn't stand strong
why let them cut you short
you should learn from there
life I thought
don't be bought
in their misery
let love keep
you near and not misery
but in harmony
while they be in misery
and you in cheer
let your relationship
stand the test of time
be a model for those that
what to wine and dine
while you put
in your time
be better and different
from other
even your
father and mother
show you can be
all you can be
if they stay out
your(unique) life
think twice
do you want to
end up
like a pair of
rolling dice
stop keeping me
a secret
and let them no
I am your future
I am tired of being
a secret
my wife


Comments about I Am Tired Of Being A Secret by LaRon Green Sr.

  • Rookie *I <3 U IAN* (4/5/2009 10:26:00 AM)

    A strong and great poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (4/5/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    Wow, great poem, i really like it and ur style is great! ! ! ! !
    thanks
    Merna (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (4/5/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    aweeeeeee that is such a touching write........i hope u find stronger reasons to come out in the open..............god bless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazem Al Jaber (4/1/2009 11:58:00 PM)

    why you should hide..
    there is no reason to hide..
    if you really love her, ., you shouldn`t do..even you should be proud..
    so nice and well written..
    hazem al.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,536 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (3/31/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    Nice and free from emotional conflict
    that one may keep hidden in 'secret'.
    One who is able to strip the layers of pain away,
    discovers and values the 'self' with a more appreciation
    of others.Very nice depiction. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*~(\ /) ~*~Payyton: DrowningSorrow~*~(\ /) ~*~ (3/31/2009 4:06:00 PM)

    Strong in more ways than one, flawless and runs together smoothly. Well written!


    <3Payyton (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Grandmother is Watching (3/31/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    Wow.

    The lack of capitaliztion and punctuation made it run together in a wondeful way.

    Strong, yet hiding weakness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (3/31/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    Really fine. Oh dear, the culture talk the most accept it. You can`t run away. Well penned and a good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/28/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    An interesting write. A suspense could be prevailed throughout if the word 'husband' should have not been used in 4th line of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (3/27/2009 3:54:00 PM)

    As I've said before, I don't particularly like the vertical line structure. But be that
    as it may. I really enjoyed reading this. It held my interest and I was thinking
    about what a nice little work of prose this would be. This writer can write.
    He has a gift for making it interesting.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie anurag duggal (3/22/2009 1:23:00 AM)

    Hey loved the poem
    beautifully composed haaan
    10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thomas Coltrin (3/21/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    what happened...........and how old r u....? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 22, 2012


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