Joseph Lee 2


Forever Dark - Poem by Joseph Lee 2

It was as dark as night
I had woken up at midnight
It was strange night
Chirp chirp chirp, the birds are chirping at night

What if it wasn't night? I thought
No what if it was morning and I couldn't tell
I slept again thinking I would just wake up in the morning
I woke up but it was still pitch black. I was blind

What will I do?
I had always wanted to be an artist
I had always wanted to drive a car
What am I going to do, my future is screwed up

I dream about being able to see my mother who died when I was born
Then I wake up feeling as bad as I have ever been
What will I do?
Now I'm just sitting here telling someone whom I can't see what to write


Comments about Forever Dark by Joseph Lee 2

  • Rookie John Lee (9/29/2013 7:29:00 PM)

    Use less connectives in your poem. There is too much connectives, and that makes the poem feel 'Uncomfortable' (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Abdulaziz Alagil (9/29/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    what a grate poem, , looking forward to read more of your poems! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 29, 2013


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