Forgive Poem by Blai gonzalez

Forgive

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-Take care-, they said.

While I was packing for leaving

And never come back.



Those paths I walked upon, were the greatest I saw

Those rivers I sneaked in, were the rivers I grow

Those lands I stood for, were the lands I know.



Filthy hands of hard-work done.

Teary chicks of loosy soul.

Heavy back I carried with'



Lonely heart… I must forgive.

Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,loneliness,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 04 October 2016

Beautiful train of thought, well brought forth in good diction with conviction. An insightful poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Blai.

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